Those phenomenal days
When we sat near the sea shore
Silently hand in hand
Listening to the harmonic streams of water
Those phenomenal days
When you used to take me
Out of this world
With your tender and powerful touch
With your every intense kiss
My mind gets blown
Like i’m in a world of Neptune
Where strong wind blows
With your warm and tight hugs
When i’m cold
Feels like i’m travelling to the world of Venus
Where it’s so warm
And every minute spent with you
Feels like the atmosphere of Mars
Desert-like
Where there is no one but you
Coz babe you make me forget about this world
And those profound eyes
I get lost in them expeditiously
Just like the world of Uranus
Coz so deep just like the color of the sea
Like the one we’re sitting nearby
Tilted blue-green
How do you do it
You take me to different worlds
Babe
There is something in you
That no one else can see
But me
That no one else can feel
But me
Coz babe i love you with all the madness in my soul
Cherishing those phenomenal days
Longing you to take me out of this world again.
-Ifrah ❤
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Beautiful poetry!!!! 🙂
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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True, really mind gets blown
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It’s wonderful, ifrahrao! Truly beautiful.
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Thanks a bunch! 🙂
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I’m in awe of your gift sweetheart. It is precious and I thank you for sharing it with the world.
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Haha imaginary gift you can say! 😛
And you’re welcome! 🙂
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This made me smile ^_^
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I’m glad! 🙂
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Beautiful…How fortunate you are to have one another. Cheers =)
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Thanks!
And just to clarify i don’t have anyone yet, it’s imaginary! 🙂
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Cheers for the imaginary phenomenal days! hehe. this is beautiful ifrahrao 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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🙂
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dear if you wrote this then let me tell ya that this is the most beautiful romantic poem i have read till now … having flashbacks .. love it .. 🙂
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Aha any doubt? 🙂 Of course i did lol…Thanks a bunch! I’m so very glad you liked it! 😀
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no no no .. i loved it .. 😉
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😀
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do we share our theme layout ?? 🙂
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Could be…my pleasure if it’s relatable to you! 🙂
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hmm .. i think we do .. its lingonberry theme right ??
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Oh wow.. words truly from the heart, with desire and wish.. Beautiful :O
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Thank you so much! :’)
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Hey I have nominated you for the free writing challenge so kindly check it out.
https://chococurrent.wordpress.com/2015/05/18/the-free-writing-challenge-i/
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Sure, thanks for the nomination! 🙂
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You are welcome 🙂 will be waiting for your post =D
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This is so, so beautiful and very captivating!
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Thanks a bunch! Glad you liked it! 🙂
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In the late 1980’s I was just a child, I had begged and begged for a telescope for christmas. I didn’t get one. But my parents got me one for my birthday a few months later. I saw Jupiter, golden brown, Mars, bright red, Venus, bright white, then Saturn, a dusty brown, followed by Neptune, a cold intense blue. Then, finally, with anticipation, I found Uranus with my telescope, and it mesmerized me, a bluish green, like you described, with beautiful clear star dots behind it. To be able to see so far away, a world of clouds was amazing. All the planets were amazing. Your poem reminded me of that night, and your love for that person in your poem, is amazing.
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Thanks a bunch!
I’m glad it bought you memories! 🙂
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